Tuesday, May 25, 2010
I'm going to Disney World!
Wednesday, April 21, 2010
An Agent Story

Status: Halfway
A few days later a reputable agent contacted me to see the full. I didn't hold my breath. I assumed she was emailing a lot of the contestants to see their work. Two days later she called to offer representation. I was stunned. I managed to call her back and carry on a coherent conversation. I did learn that when an agent says, "I'd love to work with you," it means: I'm offering representation. I didn't pick up on that...I had to outright ask, "Are you offering representation?" Oops! I liked her, but asked if I could have a week to think about it and contact some other agents who'd shown interest in my work. She agreed.
I'd first heard agent Jenn Schober of Spencerhill Associates speak on a panel at Nationals in San Fran and had made a mental note. She was the type of person I wanted to rep my work. At Nationals in DC I chose an agent appointment with her. As I stepped up to her table she said, "You smell like vanilla!"
Uh...."It's my hand lotion."
She grabbed my hands, lifted them to her nose and inhaled. I tried not to laugh. We got along great and she requested two partials. We emailed several times, and she eventually rejected but asked to see future work and revisions. When I'd originally sent the partials, I'd reminded her of the hand lotion incident and she enthusiastically replied that she remembered me.
When I emailed to ask if she'd look at my GH finalist MS, I mentioned the hand lotion. Once again she remembered me and immediately offered to read the work. She loved the manuscript. When she called, she offered to rep me. I accepted and we talked for an hour. I knew I'd made the right decision.
I'm still beaming.
Tuesday, January 12, 2010
Kindle Quandary
Status: Still out of sync from holidays

I felt horrible when I did it, but I'd felt worse knowing she'd spent a lot of money on something I'd never use. And yes, it was returnable.
Am I the only person who doesn't want one? I held the white plastic rectangle in my hands for a while, asking myself if this was how I wanted to read books, and the answer was a definite NO. I love my books. I love to see the unique covers stacked on my shelves. I run my finger along the spines, pausing on some, skipping others, remembering the story and how it made me feel. I don't think it'd be the same on a kindle. Somehow the above picture doesn't hold the same appeal as reading a thick paperback on the beach. (Must be an Oregon beach. Looks cold.)
Some claim this is the future for all books, and we'll eventually move away from paper completely. In Rachelle Gardner's blog yesterday, she mentions technologies for interactive books and magazines such as embedded links, video pop-ups, and choose-your-own ending. I like the idea of the first two technologies for non-fiction, but I don't believe they'll be popular for adult fiction, although my kids would love it in their books.
Tuesday, December 29, 2009
Word Counts
Status: Slow
Tuesday, December 15, 2009
Holiday Traditions

Current Project: Romantic Suspense
Status: bit by bit
I can't write about writing this week. Too much holiday stuff going on. My writing has slowed recently because I have food on the brain. It's normal for this time of year. I start craving turkey dinners with all the accompaniments and cookies. Lots of cookies. Frosted sugar cookies in the shape of snowmen, thick and chewy oatmeal cookies with cranberries and white chocolate chips, sharp ginger cookies rolled in chunky sugar, and lemon bars dusted with powdered sugar. *sigh*
The kids have a list of holiday traditions they don't want to skip. Several cookie recipes of course, Chex mix, the Christmas tree farm with animals to pet, a trip to pick out their 2009 ornaments, toy shopping for Channel 8's toy drive, gold paint hand prints on the tree skirt which I label with names and the year, decorating gingerbread houses, decorating their own little trees in their bedrooms, a new box of Christmas crafts from Oriental Trading, and a trip to The Dollar Tree where I let them choose gifts for each other and family.
I once read in a parenting magazine that it is important to make a big deal out of the holidays for kids. I repeat this mantra in my head several times a year. At Easter when I'm cleaning up egg dye, on the Fourth of July when my youngest is moaning about sore feet from walking to the parade, and of course at Christmas when I'm wrestling with yards and yards of garland and lights. Sometimes I just want to throw up my hands, forget the traditions, and pour a stiff drink.
But all the hassle and mess has a purpose. My chest gets tight as I watch them decorate the tree and with each ornament they pull out of the box someone exclaims, "Remember this one?!" I fight to keep my eyes from watering as I watch them smile as they dump the new toys they chose into the donation bin. They're good kids and I pray I'm raising them right. I hope they cherish these years and create traditions with their own children in memory of their childhood.
Time to share traditions. Doesn't have to be Christmas, any holiday will do. And what do you fondly remember from your childhood holidays?
Monday, November 30, 2009
A Writer's Christmas List
Status: Slow
Just a few things from my list this year...
Ergonomic chair that feels like I'm sitting on down cushions.
Magic potion to avoid "writer's spread" from countless hours in chair.
On call, cheap, amazing childcare
Ability to function normally on four hours of sleep
Desire to exercise
Free enthusiastic research assistant
On call computer genius who has English as a first language and understands my problem on the first explanation. Also makes free house calls and looks like George Clooney.
Quarterly writing getaways. Preferably a week long on a beach with several writing buddies.
Writing studio with big windows, view, constant calorie free pastries and great coffee, overstuffed furniture and a fireplace.
What's on your magic wish list?
Tuesday, November 17, 2009
Tantrums
Status: Plodding along
Tuesday, October 20, 2009
Another Post on POV
Current Project: Untitled RS
Status: On hold
There have been several blogs on POV in the last few weeks. Here is one more. I need to write a prologue for a finished manuscript and get the MS to an agent who requested revisions. For some reason I'm struggling to pick which character would present the strongest POV for the scene.
Quick background: The scene is during turbulence on a very small aircraft that is about to crash. Characters present are two pilots, a Federal Marshal, and a convict. The Marshal is terrified, the convict is rather calm, and the pilots are nervous but intent on their job. The convict is my villain in the story and has many POV scenes. The other characters die in the crash and have no POV scenes.
I have several choices. From a pilot POV, the reader would see the technical aspects of the plane's eminent demise and the pilot's observations of the praying Marshal and the serene convict.
From the Marshal's POV, the reader would learn of his current crime, his gambling issues, and his family. The reader would see the convict from the Marshal's POV, and I could drop some teasers about the convict to hook the reader. I like this angle, but I'm a little concerned that it could be confusing as the Marshal dies and has no other scenes.
From the villain's POV, I could drop a little back story that I've placed in a later chapter and give the reader a taste of his character.
Another idea I've tossed around is placing the prologue in first person. Either the villain or Marshal. The rest of the book is in third, but I've read some terrific first person prologues that reveal fascinating bits of character. Diana Gabaldon does this.
What's your favorite POV to write in and what are your thoughts on moving from a first person prologue to a third for the rest of the story?
Tuesday, October 06, 2009
A Book Review aka I Couldn't Think of a Topic
Current Project: Untitled RS
Status: Coming along
Don't you love it when you pick up an unknown book and it's terrific? I brought home a ton of books from Nationals. Most I started and put down. I try to give them at least fifty pages to hook me. That's pretty generous.
Kristan Higgins hooked me immediately with TOO GOOD TO BE TRUE. Now I understand why she won a RITA for a different book in 2008. Her voice is fresh, funny, and poignant. A contemporary romance from HQN, TOO GOOD TO BE TRUE made me laugh out loud several times. I admire any author that can write funny. I can't. It's truly a gift. Not only funny, Kristan tugs at the heartstrings, too.
The character development is fantastic. The heroine, Grace, has lost her fiancee to her younger sister. To avoid the tidal wave of sympathy, Grace invents a perfect boyfriend, something she's done multiple times in her past. The hero is a hunky ex-con, but her friends and family can't see past his "felon" label. The secondary characters add spice and laughs. The rude grandma, the wimpy ex, the quarreling parents. The dialog between the heroine and these secondaries is skillful and revealing.
I loved this book. I don't read a lot of straight contemporary romance, but I plan to purchase all of Kristan's back list.
What have you read recently that you loved?
Tuesday, September 22, 2009
Lessons Learned. Hopefully.
Status: Just finished revisions a la Eli
Tuesday, August 25, 2009
If Real Life Imitated a Romance Novel
Status: Coming along
A couple years ago, someone commented to me that romance novels can ruin a marriage because women compare their husbands to the heroes and find them coming up short. I blinked and asked if the woman if she was serious. She nodded and told me of a friend who'd left her husband for a bit. The friend believed her romance novels contributed to her need to leave her husband. He just wasn't as good as the men she was reading about. HUH?? "Is she crazy?" I asked after I picked up my jaw. "It's not real. It's a book!" I can't get this conversation out of my head. Are there readers who can't separate reality from the pages? I started thinking...what if real life was like a romance novel? There would be definite pros and cons.
Cons:kidnappings
Can anyone add to my lists? And have you heard of this issue with readers before?
Monday, August 10, 2009
Bad Reviews and Thick Skin.
Status: Coming along
- It's a holocaust of prose.
- If you hate Western Civilization, movable type, and the English language...
- It's the same (plot) that has been reused and repackaged in every piece of YA literature for the last few years.
- Shallow...really shallow...I was bored for the majority of the book...tiresome
- This book fades into dust.
- A candy coated turd
Ugh. The interesting part comes after the nasty reviews: How the author reacted. Some say they laughed hard, one said she took deep breaths and headed for the fridge, another said she got depressed and ate chocolate. I read almost every review on this site and never saw the words "I will never write again." Even the authors who wrote of heartfelt emotional reactions to the reviews, brushed themselves off, tried to see the positive, or else utterly ignore it and moved on.
Where would I fall in this list of reactions? If someone called my work a schizophrenic tangle, I'd crawl under the covers and not open my laptop for a month.
Published people, can you share your worst? For the unpubs, what would be your reaction?
Tuesday, July 28, 2009
STOLEN HEAT
Status: Trying to finish
Late to post. I apologize. I'm helping the husband pack the truck to take the kids camping for 3 or 4 days. I get to stay home because I work for the next three days. Maybe. I have a hunch my strep throat is making its third appearance in as many months.
This woman is the blogging queen this month. I have tripped over her and STOLEN HEAT at every blog I visit. Her stamina blows me away.
HAPPY RELEASE DAY, ELISABETH!!
CONGRATULATIONS!!
Tuesday, July 14, 2009
East Coast Update
Status: On Hold til RWA is over
I arrived in New York last Thursday morning after a red-eye flight. Luckily I managed good sleep on the plane. Even with a layover in the middle. I'd never been to NYC before. I met my roommate, Susan, on Facebook about six months ago. She's a romantic suspense writer from Atlanta and we got along fabulously. (Thank God!)
Thriller writer, facebook buddy, and New York City local Tom O'Callaghan took Susan and I under his wing, showing us the sights of the city. A convertible ride with the top down was perfect for taking pictures. But I admit to closing my eyes at times. Tom drives like a New York cabbie. Fast and fearless and all over the road. Strangely I felt safe the entire time. Safer than the real cab rides I later took. Tom also guided us down into the subway system. He doesn't use the subway and we fumbled around for a while before getting to the Statue of Liberty. Susan and I voted for a cab ride back to the Hyatt. I owe my fantastic NY experience to this generous man.
Another highlight was standing guard for Lee Child at the book signing. I'd volunteered for a group author signing and most of us were assigned crowd control. I was assigned to Lee specifically because he was expected to draw a large group. Susan came along and we parked ourselves against the wall next to his table. People probably thought we were Lee Child groupies. I chatted with another woman as I stood guard, exchanging stories about the conference and talking writing in general. We'd talked for five minutes before I discovered she was Danielle Perez, an editor from Bantam Dell who was there to welcome Lee.
Susan and I flew to DC on Sunday and were pleased to find Mary Buckham and Dianna Love on our flight. Monday was the FBI tour of Quantico. We heard some fabulous speakers on undercover agents and espionage investigations. ASAC George Piro interrogated Saddam Hussein for eight months in prison. Amazing story. Some of you may have seen it on 60 minutes. Saddam talked to no other people during that time, spending five to seven hours each day with George, believing George was talking to President Bush after he'd leave each day. This was an assumption on Saddam's part. George had made no such claim. It was fascinating to hear about the personal relationship that'd developed between the two men.
At Quantico, we used the firing range, toured Hogan's Alley, and the rest of the campus. I'm tired. It's Monday night and we're currently catching our breath in the hotel room and deciding if we're too tired to go find dinner. I've posted pics on my facebook page.
Now to gear up for the whirlwind of the rest of the week.
Tuesday, June 30, 2009
I Heart Facebook
Status: It's summer. What do you think?
Tuesday, June 16, 2009
Summer Schedule
Status: Chapter 7
- Any writing done during the day will be a result of bribery. I'm willing to pay the kiddos cash to leave me alone for two or three hour blocks of time. I may even resort to paying the oldest to "babysit" her younger siblings. We've tried this before. It works well if I state she won't get paid if the kids come in my room.
- My evening writing time needs to be just that: writing time. Not chat time or Facebook time. Well, maybe a little of both, but with strictly enforced limits.
- I need a rewards system for myself. If I hit my weekly word count, what should I get? I'm stumped on this one. Any suggestions? I already drink enough Starbucks and buy enough books.
- Eleven weeks of summer for me. Two weeks devoted to conferences and their preparation, so there are nine weeks I should be able to squeeze in writing time. I challenge myself to finish this book before school starts.
- My other summer plans include more time on the elliptical and creating a set study time with the kids so their brains don't shrivel from disuse. Last year we did spelling tests and math worksheets. After school had been out for two weeks, they practically devoured the work.
- Library trips with the kids. I've raised readers. They love the library.
- Schedule weekly trips with the neighbors' kids. During past summers we've tried to set up a day a week where we all meet at a park or fun place for the kids.
What changes in your writing and life schedule during the summer?
Tuesday, June 02, 2009
Forensics and Writing
Status: Slow
On a sidenote: Enter Jenna Peterson's lottery before the 8th to win a mentorship for a year. Proceeds go to the Leukemia and Lymphoma Society. A cause now close to my heart.
Tuesday, May 19, 2009
In the Blink of an Eye
Status: Major revisions to outline
I reviewed my post from last week about the boost I'd received from a contest final. I'd been in a bit of a slump and frustrated, and the contest had given my writing some new life. Funny how fast things can change.
On Friday my family was hit with some hard news about my father's health, and once again I find my self staring at a blank screen with no words in my brain. More testing will be done this week to inform us of the degree of "bad." I'm working on the skeleton outline of my story, because it doesn't require the creativity of the actual scene structure.
A topic for this blog was nearly impossible so here is a link to a blog of Tess Gerritson's about newbies that made me smile this morning. http://www.murderati.com/blog/2009/5/5/wont-take-advice-good-luck.html
Tuesday, May 05, 2009
Black Holes
Status: Uh...need to start ASAP-due Thurs
I've been in a slump for a while. It's been like pulling teeth (can there be a more lame analogy?) to get the words on the page. I schedule my writing time and force myself to open that blasted document and pound out my lines. Then I delete and delete. Actually I move the sections I hate into a garbage document, because I can't bear to erase the blood I poured on my keyboard from the vein in my arm.
Lately I've considered throwing in the towel (another bad analogy) for good. I've questioned my motives, I've questioned my talent or lack of, and I've question the future of the publishing business. Once a year I want to give it up for good. The idea starts as a tiny bug in my brain and eats away at my motivation until I can't type a word. The future turns bleak and my creativity vanishes.
Then something happens to kick everything back into high gear. One year it was a NYT top ten author's note offering to place my MS on her agent's desk after reading my contest entry. Other times it was a request for a full from a dream agent. This year it was my Daphne final. I can't stress the timeliness of that good news.
What's sent you spiraling into that writer's black hole? And what yanked you out?
Tuesday, April 21, 2009
Hot Heros
Status: Slow, very slow
What absolutely makes you melt for a hero? And what turns you off?