One of my all-time favorite movies is Field of Dreams. It has everything I love in a movie: A young Kevin Costner (before he started making marathon-long movies you had to give up a whole day to watch), James Earl Jones (who doesn't love James Earl Jones's voice?!), baseball (hello? Baseball-central-family here), and a whole lot of inspiration. I can't imagine there's anyone out there who hasn't seen the movie, but just in case you've been living in a hole in the ground the past twenty years, here's the gist...
A thirty-something ex-hippy living with his wife and young daughter on a farm in Iowa hears a strange voice that urges him to plow under his crop and build a baseball diamond in its place. Everyone thinks he's crazy. Heck, even he thinks he's crazy, yet the voice is so strong, he does it without knowing why. Thus starts the mystery of...If you build it, he will come.
I love this movie because I think many of us have experienced the same thing - although on a very different level. Every time you make a decision that sets your life on a new path, you're building something without knowing the end result. For me, it's been writing. With each word I write, I'm building a book. And the promise at the end of all my hard work is a publishing contract; seeing my name on the cover of a book. I could literally be Kevin Costner in my own personal movie. Only in my field of dreams, the voice would whisper, If you write it, you will sell.
Wow. So simple. And yet, how many writers write without reaching that ending goal of selling? Thousands.
It's not enough to simply do. You have to continue. Grow. Change. Revamp. Do again. Over and over and over and over until you figure out the mystery of that whispering voice. You have to go beyond what you think is enough. If you build it, he will come is pretty vague. Did Kevin Costner's character skimp on the construction of the field? Save money by creating a dirt infield instead of grass? Skip the bleachers or the backstop or figure, "Hey, I created a diamond, I don't really need to plow under more corn to build the whole outfield?" Nope. He put everything he had into that field without knowing what would happen in the end or why he was even supposed to do it in the first place. And he didn't stop there. He left his family and farm and set out on a cross-country trip because somewhere inside he knew just building the field wasn't enough. There was more he was supposed to do.
If you write it, you will sell. For most of us, that is the end goal we're striving for. I've met writers who think simply by writing they will reach that ultimate goal of publication. Some have natural talent which makes writing easy for them, therefore they don't think they have to work as hard as the rest of us. Some are simply arrogant. These writers are convinced everything they write is gold. Their work doesn't change and grow over the years. They believe every ounce of praise they receive and reject any criticism as hogwash. They are the ones who know everything, who get bored easily with their projects, who skip over details and send their work out convinced it's the next NYT Bestseller, then question why they aren't yet published. These writers are all over the loops, they're the ones asking questions and seeking advice. They're in every chapter, at every conference you attend. But the reality in this business is unless you are constantly learning, changing, growing, challenging yourself from book to book, applying what you learn in one manuscript to the next, and are editing, editing, editing to make your current work the best it can be, you will most likely never reach your ending goal of publication. That voice is still going to be whispering in your head, telling you to plow under your corn, and you aren't going to have a clue what the heck it means you should do next.
Writing is not a simple career. I think most of us know that. The more you write, the harder it is to do. Plots get more complicated, characters become more rich. If you're doing it right, you're striving to make each book better than the last. Each of us are writers because we love the written word, and we each have our own personal field of dreams. But simply building it isn't enough. You have to continue to work for what you really want. Never give up changing and growing as a writer.
The tagline for Field of Dreams is: If you believe in the impossible, the incredible can happen. I would amend that for us writers: If you strive to change the impossible, the incredible can happen.
What do you think? Is simply writing enough? Or is there more to this whole writing gig than just putting your butt in the chair everyday? And while we're at it, tell me what you've done to become a better writer this week.
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GAG! Gee thanks, Eli. Now I feel like a total LOSER because I am always whining how much I hate revisions and don't like doing them. This makes me wish I kept my fingers off the keyboard more than once when belching out my disfavor with reworking something!LOL
As for Field of Dreams - I've seen bits and pieces. Having grown up in baseball and being forced to be the extra in the field during practices and never getting to bat (pout) and then being made to keep score for 9 years (while my brothers played) I really have a hard time watching anything related to baseball. Call it a stigma!
To answer your questions- Is writing really enough? NO- I can write all I want, but if I don't put out a story that moves someone or lightens their day, I haven't done my job. And in the case of writing Historical - if I don't teach the reader some aspect of the past they may not have known - I haven't done my job.
What have I done to become a better writer this week... That's tough because I've been researching when I haven't been writing. I guess just writing and going back through and really digging for the right word I want in a particular spot. The only writing help thing I've read this week is on the PRO loop by an agent. And I'll attend the local writers meeting tonight. Not sure who the speaker is.
Thanks for a great thought provoking and well-written blog. Sheesh- now I have to follow this tomorrow!
I love that movie, too. You're right, it was Kevin Costner's pre-epic era and reminds me how enjoyable he can be. Which segues into another thought--this movie had a relatively simple, straight-forward plot, a message of inspiration and hope. It wasn't some unwieldy over plotted dynamo. And it was also beautiful and touching and stuck with you for a long time. Over plotting can lead to trouble, trouble, trouble!!! And to disinterest and boredom for a reader.
Meanwhile, I agree with your sentiments and thank you for providing a metaphor I can use as a catalyst to pursue growth. It's true, you do need to challenge yourself.
This week, buried in rewrites, I challenged myself to plug every conceivable hole in my dike. I plugged the last one 24 hours ago and so far, no new additional leaks have occurred. Yea!!! So now it's one last read though to make sure it all hangs together ... then this baby is out of here.
Is it perfect? Of course not. I can't even attest it's enjoyable. But I did my very best and hopefully, it will come through in the end. And if it doesn't, hopefully I can think of a way to fix it.
And then it's on to plotting the next book and using what I learned here about viable subplots to make my books a challenge to write and fun to read. That's my goal. That's the ultimate win/win for me.
Thanks for the reminder.
Paty--I think days spent researching the past for the right historical data sounds VERY challenging. I read earlier that you called your father for some information and it made me smile. My dad died many years ago--I wish I could call him! You're lucky.
By using his memories and the details of his past, even in a small way to enhance your fiction, you are kind of recording the history of his past and creating something your children's children can absorb someday and that's neat.
Alice
Thanks Alice! I consider research learning, but it doesn't have anything to do with my writing talents.
Yes, my dad has lots of stories! That I've heard many times! LOL He grew up on cattle ranches in Nebraska. So he has lots of helpful info. They were still doing things in his youth (haying and feeding with horses, using outhouses and wood stoves) that they did in the later 1800's so he is a good source of knowledge.
Great Post Eli. Is writing enough? No, but it IS a big part of it. Without the commitment to butt-in-chair and the follow-through, all the rest is truly impossible. So if you write it, THEN persevere, MAYBE it will sell. I like your revised tagline a lot. But, I also think that there is another end of the spectrum where writers spend years and years polishing one single manuscript so that it shines and miss the growth that comes from writing and revising multiple manuscripts. So there has to be a balance between building & working.
What have I done this week? I'm not sure. I *hope* that through grading student papers and judging contest entries, little bits of knowledge are soaking in. I also found out that I'm not teaching this summer. I'm not doing nearly enough building OR revising :)
Wavy--I'm kind of glad for you that you aren't teaching this summer. It's the lull before the storm, baby, so maybe you can use the time for yourself. I hope you're not disappointed.
You make an excellent point about letting a manuscript go. The further I go along in this career, the harder it is for me to accept something as finished. But there has to be a point where you say to yourself, given the time and my skill restraints, this is as good as I can get it. You move on, just as you said, and adapt.
Alice
Very thoughtful post, Eli! Though I haven't seen Field of Dreams (think I'll rent it, though!) I'm quite familiar with voices that tell me to do things that don't make sense at the time! :)
No, I don't think writing is enough -- though that has to be the foundation or you have nothing to build on. Write it, believe in your story, sell it, promote it ... there's a lot, isn't there? However, there's also the school of thought that if you put something in motion and believe in it as you push toward that goal, the forces of the universe will open doors to make it happen.
What did I do this week to improve my writing? Cuddled with my doggies -- they teach me all I need to know! Funny thing is, I seem to have info for improving my writing pouring in from a lot of sources. What I really need to do is more "butt in the chair" time!
I, too, liked Field of Dreams, Eli. I guess my vision is: If I write it, they will read it. But I know there is a lot more to having readers than simply writing. Still, I'm at that first step (up to 16,491 words so far). I'm reading books on writing to inspire me and help me do each scene better than the last. I've just finished "How I Write: Secrets of a Bestselling Author" by Janet Evanovich with Ina Yalof (2006 and at Salem Library in New section). Next on my list is "On Writing Romance: How to Craft a Novel That Sells" by Leigh Michaels (2007 from Writer's Digest).
Wow! Barbara, I'm really impressed at your dedication to reading books designed to improve your craft. The Evanovich book was great.
Alice, no, I'm not disappointed. I mean my bank will be disappointed, but frankly I'm relieved. For many reasons, this term is turning out to be much harder than anticipated and I NEED the time.
Sorry I'm just now responding to posts, ladies. I'm dying without my computer!!!
Okay, Paty, first of all, you are not a LOSER. And this post was not directed at you, although I do have to admit that all our discussions about revisions here the past few days has definitely had me thinking about this concept of paying your dues and expecting to sell. It's come up on some loops I read - as if you write X number of years, you DESERVE a publishing contract. Although writing for X number of years does not guarantee that you are growing and changing as a writer.
In addition, I think we all know when our favorite published authors aren't growing as writers anymore. We discussed this at the meeting last week - when their heroines all seem the same, when their plots are all oddly similar, when the romance is so predictable you feel like you've read the book before. I think it's a trap we all can easily fall into - whether we are published authors or not. I just finished a scene in my wip and after reading it again realized I'd ended a scene the exact same way in my last book. That's not growing and changing as a writer!
Thanks, Alice. ;)
Your comment about Field Of Dreams being a relatively simple plot has me thinking. My CP's in the process of revising her RS for her agent. And after reading through her ideas, I realize how intricate her plot is. I think you're right in that sometimes, simple plots are the ones we remember and love and the more complex ones can actually deter readers in the long run. They can be mentally draining.
My other favorite Kevin Costner movie is Tin Cup. But that's a blog for another day. :)
Wavy, ah, so very true. There does come a point where you have to move on - but that point shouldn't come just because you're bored and ready to work on something else. It should be done when you are convinced you have created the best work you can.
And I'm with Alice. I'm glad to hear you're going to have some time to yourself before the baby comes. Trust me. You'll be glad you did.
Genene, you haven't seen Field of Dreams? I'm...shocked!!!
I do think you're right in that writing is the foundation. But just as you build a house, you have to build up. And a book isn't simply written - it's edited and revised and rewritten until it's as good as it's going to get. And then there's the selling and promotion and reviews...ay ya ya.
Good for you, Barbara! How did you like Janet Evanovich's craft book?
Eli, Janet Evanovich's book is a fast, fun read. It's a compilation of answers she has given over the past 10 years to questions sent to the Q & A feature on her web site. Many of the answers are illustrated with examples from her Stephanie Plum books. Also, Ina Yalof does some summarizing and explicating. I'll bet Evanovich did very little new writing for this latest book, but I'll be taking some of her advice.
For some people, I think simply writing is enough, either because of that natural talent you mentioned, Eli, or because they just want to write. Maybe all don't need to see publication to feel fullfilled with their writing.
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