Monday, August 29, 2011
Weekly Progress Check-In
Thursday, August 25, 2011
It's Time to Break the Hero Mold!
Status: Making progress
Today I'm on my soapbox.
| Two of My Heroes |
Heroes; gotta love 'em! But riddle me this: How come it's okay to have a heroine who is (ahem) an armful (EX: Bet Me by Jenny Cruisie), but our heroes must be tall and buff?
Remember little David who slew Goliath using brains over brawn? There's proof that not all heroes have to be tall and buff. David's been admired for thousands of years.
My husband accuses us romance writers of writing heroes men can't easily relate to, because they're all too physically perfect. I have to admit, I think he has a point. Character makes a true hero.
What do you think?
Wednesday, August 24, 2011
Quote of the Day
Tuesday, August 23, 2011
The Inexpressible*
Music.
For some reason, when I really start getting into the heads of my characters—when they truly become real to me—I start seeing them in my head when I listen to music. Not every song, mind, but I suspect I unconsciously search for songs that fit. When I've found enough songs for a decent playlist, say 20 to 30, I feel like I've found the emotional key to my story and my characters.
Sometimes I'll listen to the playlist while I'm writing, but not always. Sometimes it's enough to listen to a few songs before I start writing, just to evoke the mood I'm seeking. I'll listen in the car to spark ideas for upcoming scenes. Or I'll listen late at night before going to bed, to let new ideas germinate overnight.
I don't look for songs that tell the exact story I want to write. It's enough if a phrase or line of melody resonates strongly. Several of the songs on my current playlist are instrumental only. That doesn't always happen, but this time—oh, this time—so many of the songs I've chosen are jazz and they make me see and feel the magic and how the various characters feel about using it. Having so many instrumental songs also makes it a bit easier to listen to the playlist while writing.
If you're curious, here are the songs on my current character playlist (the order is random). I wish I could provide the actual songs for you, but I've found links to listen to (most of) them online.
Pick Up the Pieces — Avenue Blue Feat.Jeff Golub
Ever Returning — Bernward Koch
Song for Olabi — Bliss
Trinidad — Boney James
Caribbean Dream — Bryan Savage
Spontaneous Combustion — Fishbelly Black
Nothing But You — Kim Ferron
Harlem Nocturne — Kofi
Madrid — Marc Antoine
Give It Away — Zero 7
Head Over Feet — Alanis Morissette
Chain of Fools — The Commitments
Just My Luck — Kim Richey
Krafty — New Order
Zombie Jamboree — Rockapella
In Too Deep — Genesis
You Tell Me That I'm Falling Down — Linda Ronstadt
Reference Point — Acoustic Alchemy
Running on Faith — Eric Clapton (unplugged)
Foreplay — Fourplay
Breathe In, Breathe Out, Move On — Jimmy Buffett
Fever — Michael Buble
Regrets (Duo Avec Jean-Louis Murat) — Mylene Farmer
Unbound — Robbie Robertson
King of Wishful Thinking — Go West
So, that's it. As you can see, it's a bit of an eclectic mix. I'm sure it says as much about me as it does about my characters. But the right music makes my characters and my story come alive for me. How about you? Do you use music when you create your characters or when you write? I'm all ears. :-)
Catch you on the flip side...
* Title from: "After silence, that which comes nearest to expressing the inexpressible is music." — Aldous Huxley
Monday, August 22, 2011
Weekly Progress Check-In
Friday, August 19, 2011
All that is random
Status: middle of chapter 3
Thursday, August 18, 2011
WRITING SERIES CHARACTERS
Current Project: LEGACY series
Status: Just finished book #2 and the cover
I'm celebrating because I finished the edits of the second story in my series as well as the cover this past weekend. Hooray! However, because this is part of a series, it's not really "The End" but the beginning. More to come for these characters. :)
Which brings me to my topic: writing series characters.
I know other authors have carried one or two main characters through a number of books. Don't know if I could stretch and pace one character's growth for five or ten or more books.
Other series consist of secondary characters who get their own story after the wrap-up of a first or second story, with previous main characters stepping back to minor roles or just mentioned. My first three books were like this. Paty has done series like this, as has Chris and other authors.
However, the series I'm working on has overlapping events and characters from previous stories continue to grow and evolve as the family saga continues. This is new to me and it's been interesting to track major events and how those events affect each member of the family.
(At our meeting on September 1, I'll share some of the ways I've tracked the progress of this series, including storyboards, a character notebook, and massive databases.)
For instance, their home town blowing up triggers the sister and her maybe-husband to make a commitment to their relationship. The same event pushes the oldest brother to propose to a woman he has been dating only a short time. Another brother becomes involved with the reporter who returns to town after leaving in whispered shame years ago.
Throughout the series, there will be secrets revealed that will put different family members in conflict with each other, and crises that will bring them closer together.
It has been intriguing to explore how each event affects each character differently, bringing different memories or issues or changing the direction of their lives. It was a good way to get to know my characters better--put them in a crisis situation and see how they react.
I'm always interested in how other writers dig down through the emotional layers of their characters. Do you interview your characters, or think about what they would carry in their purse or pocket, or dump them into a crisis and watch them react as you get to know them? I'd love to hear your process.
Wednesday, August 17, 2011
Status: Hope to finish and get it up on Kindle this week.
I was part of a blog series on western historical novels that was read by Sue Grimshaw and she now wants us to do something like it for her blog Random Romance. But the group came up with the idea of showing what historical westerns are all about by interviewing our characters.
They didn't want all marshals or outlaws so we had to let them know what characters we would interview. I'm, of course, going to interview Wren and Himiin from Spirit of the Mountain. Because I do believe Himiin will be the only spirit interviewed.;)
But I need some help. What could be some questions the interviewer asks him that would show the genre-historical paranormal?
And Wren as a Nez Perce maiden, do have some questions you think would work for her?
I also have to come up with an interviewer other than myself. I'm thinking a National Park guide who comes upon them near Wallowa Lake would be a good interviewer. What do you think?
I'll let you know when my post runs.
Monday, August 15, 2011
Weekly Progress Check-In
Thursday, August 11, 2011
WRITING ANIMAL CHARACTERS
Status: Moving Along Again (at last)
Okay, I admit it; I’m a sucker for animals. Growing up in suburbia, we always had pets: dogs, cats, a cottontail rabbit, parakeets, guppies, horned toads, turtles, a duck, ground squirrels, coconut crabs, and for one glorious day, a turkey named Jim that my father won in a contest.
Writing animal characters is more than a gimmick. Remember the Lassie books? Or The Cat Who… mysteries? The books Water for Elephants by Sara Gruen and The Art of Racing in the Rain by Garth Stein have been on the bestseller lists for ages. In both books, animals are major characters. In the second book, Enzo is the narrator.
Wednesday, August 10, 2011
Quotes of the Day
Tuesday, August 09, 2011
The Villain of the Piece
So, um, characters... We all love to talk about our Heros and Heroines. Thinking about what makes them tick--and what makes them run screaming for the hills--is part of the fun of writing, at least for me. Hopefully they come alive for us in ways that make it to the page and into readers' hearts.
But I'd like to talk about another character. One that doesn't get quite as much attention in these kind of discussions. The Villain. I know a lot of stories don't have or need villains, but I'd like to talk about stories that do. There's nothing more disappointing than a story with a bad guy (or girl or...thing) who is supposed to be truly evil, but that never really fleshes him/her/it out. The Hero and Heroine are well rounded, with strengths and weakness, goals and motivations -- all nicely done up with a bow. But the poor Villain never takes the stage to show us what he's made of -- why, he might as well be Snidely Whiplash for all the dimension he possesses.
Wait. That's almost an insult to Snidely (who's now sulking over there in the corner), because even Snidely might be considered "just a guy with a weird fetish." 1
All joking aside, I've often wished writers would give as much thought to their Villain as they do to the "good" characters. A Villain who is one dimensional, who only exists to put roadblocks in the path of the Hero/Heroine is a disappointing Villain, indeed.
The best quote (paraphrased) I've ever heard (and wish I could remember the source) in regards to Villain character creation is: "A Villain doesn't think he's a villain -- to him, he's the hero of the story."
The stories I write all tend to have villains of one kind or another. None of them are completely evil. Each one of them believes his/her actions are justified. They all believe they're the real heros of the story.
And you know what? I let them.
Have any favorite Villains you'd like to share?
1http://bullwinkle.toonzone.net/snidely.htm
Monday, August 08, 2011
Weekly Progress Check-In
Friday, August 05, 2011
Mind Styles characterization
Status: Not as far as I want it to be
Thursday, August 04, 2011
CHARACTERS WHO WRITE THEMSELVES
Status: Almost finished with edits for second book
My series started as one book in 2004 about a young woman with seven brothers who were a little too interested in policing her love life. By the time I was three-quarters finished with the first story, the brothers were demanding--as brothers sometimes do--their own stories. And since eight didn't seem like a good number for a series, I decided their widowed adoptive mother should have her own story to round out the series.
One thing I appreciate with a series of books is once the basic setting is done and relationships between the characters are established, the writing comes fairly easily. That doesn't mean I don't have to put fingers to keyboard to get the words down. However, the characters are like family. I know their basic personalities and how they will react to situations, and they reveal secrets of their pasts and emotions perhaps even they didn't know they carried inside as their stories unfold.
In other words, the characters pretty much write themselves.
For other writers, though this may seem unfair, I've also had characters who revealed themselves one grudging trait at at time. How do your characters come together? Do they spring fully formed from your mind or take time to develop? Which ones became your favorites--the ones that flowed into the story or those you had to dig deep to find?
Meeting Today
Our discussion topic will be news from RWA National in New York.
Guests are welcome to attend. If you are new to our chapter, you may attend two meetings (for free!) before joining. If you are a former member, you may attend one meeting as a guest before re-joining the chapter.
Email us at mwvrwa @ gmail.com (remove spaces) for directions.
Wednesday, August 03, 2011
Out of my Element
Status: All company leaves this weekend!
This past weekend I participated in a book festival at Portland's Pioneer Square. It was an excellent place to watch people and interact with some interesting characters.
Donna Kiehle and I were at the table under the Jan's Paperback Books sign. We had half a dozen people come up and ask us ab out our publishing company... And one gentleman who had wild hair, his collar folded under on one side, his shirt buttoned crooked, and his fly was half open with his shirt tail sticking out. (I'm not a pervert, I was taking in his whole appearance as he reflected an interesting secondary character) Anyway, he was trying to pitch his epic, deeply emotional, action packed, epic hand-written 492 notebook pages. There are pieces of him that may end up in a book some day. ;)
There was a young man with a sign "Turn 2 God" He stood on a corner shouting. And a robust black man stood up at the speaking platform over the square, banged a plastic bottle like an anvil and preached.
Shortly after the preaching a passel of bridesmaids and groomsmen along with a bride and groom entered the square and posed for photos.
An Englishman also stopped by and chatted with Marie Friend who was next to us. He was a bit taken back when Marie first thought he was an Aussie. This started them off on an interesting chat of their favorite English actors. The man was in khaki shorts, had one of those "fishing" hats that look like safari hats. A backpack and boots. He looked like he'd just walked out of the bush so I understand why she might have thought him Aussie.
Even the couple with rowdy kids and the older man on the MAX I rode to the zoo left an impression that could pop up sometime in writing.
All of these interesting people are stored away in my brain to perhaps come out in little snippets in my secondary and perhaps even my main characters in some future book.
So you file away people. places, or incidents everywhere you go?





