Thursday, July 19, 2012

A NEW FRONTIER

Current Project: LEGACY SERIES
Status: promoting book #3, editing book #6
Posted by: Genene Valleau, writing as Genie Gabriel



My son, grandson and I went to the Evergreen Aviation & Space Museum on Sunday for the first time. I was fascinated!

I really enjoyed the aviation part--I talked about the Spruce Goose (largest airplane ever built) on both the Rogue's Angels blog <http://roguesangels.blogspot.com/> and my Legacy blog <http://oshealegacyseries.blogspot.com/> yesterday. 

However, my imagination really kicked in when we walked into the Space building. Wow! How can I weave space travel into my Legacy Series? LOL!

Two things struck me the most:
1) Those space capsules are really small--we're talking bathroom stall size. It would be a relief to get out of the capsule and float in the infinite area of space for awhile!
2) What a large part politics, fear and the Cold War played in catapulting us from the first airplane flight to a man on the moon in just 66 years. (This is my opinion, not necessarily that of the museum or anyone else.) 

Until I finish my Legacy Series, my urge to incorporate space travel will probably have to wait. But who knows, the founders of my fictional town of Halo, Oregon, loved the stars, so maybe there's a way I can work this in. Hmm…

Have you ever visited somewhere that begged--or demanded--to be the setting of one of your stories?

Monday, July 16, 2012

Weekly Progress Check-In

Welcome!  This is the Mid-Willamette Valley RWA chapter's weekly progress check-in.

Did you meet your writing goals last week?  What do you plan to accomplish this week?

(The best prize is achieving your writing goals, but as an extra incentive, we will award gift cards from Powell's bookstore to the chapter member and the non-member who check in for the most weeks in 2012.)

Wednesday, July 11, 2012

Quotes of the Day


I have been working seven days a week, so I thought I'd gather some quotes on balance to help me figure out how to get past this frenetic place I'm at:

"It's all about balance and, I think, being in the moment." (Jennie Finch)

"The trick to balance is to not make sacrificing important things become the norm." (Simon Sinek)

"I believe that being successful means having a balance of success stories across the many areas of your life. You can't truly be considered successful in your business life if your home life is in shambles." (Zig Ziglar)

"Happiness is not a matter of intensity but of balance, order, rhythm and harmony." (Thomas Merton)

"The best and safest thing is to keep a balance in your life, acknowledge the great powers around us and in us. If you can do that, and live that way, you are really a wise man." (Euripides)

"I'm afraid I'm still trying to find that balance. Especially now that everyone wants a piece of me. I find that I have to become more and more reclusive, and pick and choose when I am public and when I am private." (Sandra Cisneros)

"Life is like riding a bicycle - in order to keep your balance, you must keep moving." (Albert Einstein)

"I want to caution you against the idea that balance has to be a routine that looks the same week in and week out." (Kevin Thoman)

"Work, love and play are the great balance wheels of man's being" (Orison Swett Marden)

"But if you can create an honorable livelihood, where you take your skills and use them and you earn a living from it, it gives you a sense of freedom and allows you to balance your life the way you want." (Anita Roddick)

And that last one is my goal. Perhaps I have to accept that right now I am intensely focused on my work, and this will lead to a more balanced life in the future. I hope.

My next blog, on July 25th, will be on another aspect of self-publishing I'm currently exploring: audiobooks.

Have a good week, everyone!

Barb

Tuesday, July 10, 2012

Counting Down...

Two Weeks.

Fourteen Days.

336 Hours.

That's how long until I leave for the RWA® National Conference. Where did the time go? Three months ago, it seemed like forever, but now it's right around the corner. I'm feeling very frazzled at the moment, so pardon the short length of this blog post.

I've talked about my Golden Heart® experience in the last few months, but I haven't talked very much about my co-Finalists. Let me tell you, you'll want to remember their names, because there's some serious talent in this group. Several have already sold — some, multiple books — and I don't doubt that the rest of us are close.

No matter who takes home the heart necklace, we were all winners the moment our names were announced as finalists. (In fact, I have a sneaking suspicion some of us won't mind our names not being called just so we don't have to give a thank you speech in front of 2000+ people. :-)

The way I look at it, I'm very fortunate to be where I am at the moment. This has been an incredible validation of my writing, and it's something I'll remind myself of whenever doubt and fear try to creep inside in the future (and I know they will). What this experience has also taught me, though, is there's always room for improvement. And the only way to improve is to keep writing. I can't wait.

Deborah Wright
Website: www.Deborah-Wright.com
Twitter: @DeborahBWright
Facebook: Deborah.Wright.Author

Monday, July 09, 2012

Weekly Progress Check-In

Welcome!  This is the Mid-Willamette Valley RWA chapter's weekly progress check-in.

Did you meet your writing goals last week?  What do you plan to accomplish this week?

(The best prize is achieving your writing goals, but as an extra incentive, we will award gift cards from Powell's bookstore to the chapter member and the non-member who check in for the most weeks in 2012.)

Friday, July 06, 2012

Fighting Evil or Embracing It

Current Project: Catching Meara
Status: Just started chapter 5





The topic this week is intriguing. Bad guy are the most fun to write, at least for me. They can do and say anything they please. They can be multidimensional and even have some good qualities. But I don't think my villains ever have good in them.

As a reader of romance I would have a difficult time with a womanizer who has declared his love for a woman but continues to make love with other women or in some cases men. But there are good books who have this very story line. But as others have said, there have to be some very good reasons for the hero to stray from his heroine. 

Most of my books have antagonists who stand in the way of either the hero or the heroine from finding true love. To me this adds dimension to the story. One of the things the ebook industry has helped are the stereotypical plot lines that have to be a certain way to be published. 

I say go with your gut. Make sure you justify everything your characters do even if it isn't the norm. And you will have a book that works. 

Thursday, July 05, 2012

CHOOSING THE LOW ROAD

Current Project: My LEGACY series
Status: Book #3 released, doing copy edits for Book #5, doing deep edits to Book #6
Posted by: Genie Gabriel 



This must be the week for bad guys! 


I'm at a point in my edits when I need to introduce a new character--but the opposite of Meggan's rake who falls in love and becomes a hero.

My new character will seem to be a nice guy who turns out to be a villain.

This is an interesting development for me. I generally have my bad guys be that way from beginning to end of a story. 

However, in writing my LEGACY series, there are degrees of villainy. In the first book, the hero locks up a bad guy. However, a bigger, badder guy comes along in the next book, and the next. 

This will continue until the end of the series, when the ringleader will be uncovered. 

Since the series takes place in a small town, the villains may be people who have lived and worked in this town for a lifetime. A neighbor. Someone my hero or heroine thought was a friend. 

Which brings me back to my challenge. How to write a nice guy who has darkness in his heart. And what's his motive for choosing the dark path. 

Have you ever written a character like this?

Monday, July 02, 2012

Weekly Progress Check-In

Welcome!  This is the Mid-Willamette Valley RWA chapter's weekly progress check-in.

Did you meet your writing goals last week?  What do you plan to accomplish this week?

(The best prize is achieving your writing goals, but as an extra incentive, we will award gift cards from Powell's bookstore to the chapter member and the non-member who check in for the most weeks in 2012.)

Wednesday, June 27, 2012

Adventures in Self-Publishing: Some Quotes and BSP



A few quotes and some blatant self-promotion...


I released my third book this week.  I started this particular book when I was a teenager.  All these years, it's been back and forth, in one form or another, never really finished and never really in a form that seemed to be what I wanted it to be.

"There is no greater agony than bearing an untold story inside you." (Maya Angelou)

But I could never let it go.  It kept coming back, needing to be told.  There was something way down in the heart of it that I had to work out.

"The most important things are the hardest to say. They are the things you get ashamed of, because words diminish them -- words shrink things that seemed limitless when they were in your head to no more than living size when they're brought out. But it's more than that, isn't it? The most important things lie too close to wherever your secret heart is buried, like landmarks to a treasure your enemies would love to steal away. And you may make revelations that cost you dearly only to have people look at you in a funny way, not understanding what you've said at all, or why you thought it was so important that you almost cried while you were saying it. That's the worst, I think. When the secret stays locked within not for want of a teller but for want of an understanding ear." (Stephen King)

Eventually it became a whole book.  When it was done, I was kind of surprised at what the story ended up being about, because I hadn't consciously set out for where I ended up.

"Fantasy is hardly an escape from reality. It's a way of understanding it." (Lloyd Alexander)

It made all the rounds of agents and editors, and got a lot of positive feedback, but it just "wasn't commercial."  It just "didn't fit the market."

"Writing is the hardest way of earning a living, with the possible exception of wrestling alligators." (Olin Miller)

So now, out it goes into the world.

"The public is the only critic whose opinion is worth anything at all." (Mark Twain)

Will it be a success?  Who knows.  So far it's starting to sell without me even announcing it's been released, including two copies sold in Germany on the first day (who knows why).

"Stories may well be lies, but they are good lies that say true things, and which can sometimes pay the rent." (Neil Gaiman)

It served its original purpose, which was purely personal.

"I write to find out what I'm thinking, what I'm looking at, what I see and what it means. What I want and what I fear." (Joan Didion)

Now I can just hope it serves some purpose in the world, and isn't just a waste of pixels on someone's overstuffed Kindle.

"There are books of which the backs and covers are by far the best parts." (Charles Dickens)

Happy writing, everyone!  May your journey be smooth, and may all your stories find an understanding ear. :-)

Barb

Tuesday, June 26, 2012

Countdown to Anaheim: 4 Weeks and Counting

One month from today I'll be on an airplane headed for Orange County. This will be my fourth RWA® National Conference, but my first time as a Golden Heart® Finalist. I have to say, I still can't believe it when I type those words. The time since the Finalist announcements in March has passed so quickly, and it feels very much like a dream.

I attended my first National Conference in San Francisco, shortly after I joined RWA. I've spoken about it before, but I have to say I was totally unprepared for the experience. I've attended conferences before--bigger, even--but all of them were related to my previous career in High Tech. I was used to huge, noisy crowds, so the RWA conference should have been old hat. Shyeah, right!

Those other conferences? 90-to-95% male. I was used to walking into a room filled with guys and being one of a handful of women, and I was comfortable with it. I didn't realize how much I'd internalize that experience as the norm until I attended that first RWA® conference! The emotional impact of entering a room filled with upwards of 2,000 women, all there to advance their writing careers, was overwhelming. I'm sure there were men in attendance, but unlike the tech conferences where I could pick out the other women, I had a difficult time seeing them.

I went against all my previous conference experience and tried to cram every minute full. Not surprisingly, I spent a lot of that first conference in a bit of a daze. Thank goodness for the conference recordings! Learning to pace myself was a lesson I've since taken to heart.

I attended the Washington, D.C. conference the following year and that experience was just as incredible. I made sure to take some time for myself. I'd been to D.C. before, so I took the Metro to the Mall on a couple of afternoons and spent time revisiting the monuments and the Smithsonian. I don't regret a moment spent away from the sessions. My head was clearer when I returned and my energy level was up. I'm a card-carrying introvert, you see. I enjoy the energy of the conference, but I eventually feel drained if I don't recharge with alone time (and alone can mean being out amongst strangers, so long as it's by myself, if you get my drift).

2010 was the year of personal setbacks and heartaches that I won't go into here, but suffice it say, I skipped the 2010 conference. I have, however, listened to the conference recordings. May I say, getting the recordings, especially if you don't attend the conference in person, is a GREAT way to get the workshops and stay up-to-date.

I almost didn't go to last year's conference in New York. I'm very, very happy I did attend. I credit Chapter-mate Barbara Cool Lee with encouraging me to not only attend, but also to pitch to an agent--as well as for all her invaluable advice on preparing my pitch! I'm not sure I would have committed to entering the Golden Heart® if I hadn't gone to New York. And if I hadn't, I wouldn't be here now, feeling as if I were living a dream!

I already know the Conference in Anaheim will be special. I'm one of a group of over 60 other incredible women--my fellow Firebirds*--many of whom I've had the privilege to get to know online since the Golden Heart® announcement. I can't wait to meet them in person. I have a feeling I'm going to have to learn that whole "pacing myself" business all over again!

What about you? Will you be attending the RWA® National Conference in Anaheim this year? Do you have any Conference experiences or advice you'd be willing to share? Or, if you haven't attended Nationals yet, and/or aren't planning on going this year, do you have any questions about the conference?

Deborah Wright
www.Deborah-Wright.com
Twitter: @DeborahBWright
Facebook: Deborah.Wright.Author

* Each Golden Heart® class chooses a name for itself--one which they feel represents the feelings/experiences/etc. of the group. We have chosen the name FIREBIRDS. Our motto is: FIREBIRDS: Forged in fire and flying higher!

Monday, June 25, 2012

Weekly Progress Check-In

Welcome!  This is the Mid-Willamette Valley RWA chapter's weekly progress check-in.

Did you meet your writing goals last week?  What do you plan to accomplish this week?

(The best prize is achieving your writing goals, but as an extra incentive, we will award gift cards from Powell's bookstore to the chapter member and the non-member who check in for the most weeks in 2012.)

Thursday, June 21, 2012

INSPIRATIONAL JOURNEY

Current Project: LEGACY series
Status: Doing edits to book #6
Posted by: Genene Valleau, writing as Genie Gabriel




I wanted to share this inspirational story with you that I came across while researching classic rock bands to feature on my Rock'n'Romance blog.


I'm older than most of you, so remember the rock band, Journey, the first time around. :)


I wasn't a die-hard fan, but I enjoyed their music and memorized their hits. These were in the days before kids and writing and a lot of other commitments. But I digress…


This band has had many huge successes. A quote from their Web site <http://www.journeymusic.com/home> states, "Since the group's formation in 1973, the band has earned 19 Top 40 singles and 25 Gold and Platinum albums. The band's Greatest Hits album is certified 15 times Platinum, bringing Journey into the elite club of Diamond-certified album holders." 


Starting as an all-instrumental act, the band finally found big success when it hired the legendary Steve Perry as a vocalist. A string of hits followed, such as "Don't Stop Believin'," "Faithfully," and "Open Arms." They went through a number of changes in the band's members, and their lead singer developed health problems and eventually left Journey permanently. The band seemed to fade away.


However, when their song, "Don't Stop Believin'" was featured on the finale of the TV show, "The Sopranos," interest in the band flared again.


But they had no lead singer. 


Desperate to find someone who could recreate the classic Journey sound, one of the founding members turned to YouTube, and discovered Arnel Pineda fronting a band in the Philippines that mimicked classic rock bands--including Journey. 


Impressed, he called the other band members and they flew Pineda to the U.S. for an audition. Within a few songs, Pineda was their new vocalist, joining the band in 2008. I especially enjoyed this CBS News Sunday Morning interview <http://www.metacafe.com/watch/1378774/arnel_pineda_cbs_news_sunday_morning_interview/> that mixes an interview with the band, old Journey clips featuring vocalist Steve Perry (in the earlier days), and footage of their new frontman Arnel Pineda. 


If you watch the entire interview, be prepared for a touching story. Pineda's mother taught him to sing from a very early age, and his parents entered him in singing contests, which he said were torture for the shy kid he was. His mother died when Pineda was 13, leaving the family bankrupt after her illness. Pineda ended up homeless, gathering pieces of metal for food.


Eventually he ended up singing in nightclubs, as he was doing when Journey saw the video of him. The band has released two albums since Pineda joined them, which contains some new material written by several of the band members including Pineda. They have been touring extensively around the world, and in the United States and Canada for the rest of 2012--fronted by a formerly homeless teenager from the Philippines. 


His mother's gift of song lives on in Pineda and is giving new life to the incredible journey of this band. As Pineda says, he's not just singing "Don't Stop Believin'," he's living it. And the band who had faded is once again sparkling in the spotlight. 


Love the happy ending (or new beginning :) to Pineda's story, and I find inspiration in several ways from what he and the band have accomplished. Learn your craft, take advantage of opportunities, look for answers in unlikely places, and "Don't Stop Believin'."


Hope you enjoy the interview and the music, as well as the inspiration!

Monday, June 18, 2012

Weekly Progress Check-In

Welcome!  This is the Mid-Willamette Valley RWA chapter's weekly progress check-in.

Did you meet your writing goals last week?  What do you plan to accomplish this week?

(The best prize is achieving your writing goals, but as an extra incentive, we will award gift cards from Powell's bookstore to the chapter member and the non-member who check in for the most weeks in 2012.)

Wednesday, June 13, 2012

Adventures in Self-Publishing: Goodreads


Here are a few tips I've learned about Goodreads in the last couple of months:

*To become a Goodreads author, you simply "claim" your author profile.  Search for your books, and then where the author name is listed, click on it, and there should be a place to click to claim the profile.  Fill out the form and in a day or so your status will be changed from reader to author, which opens up a lot of promotional opportunities.

*Set up an author user profile for each separate pseudonym.  Unlike a lot of social networks, which limit you to only one account, Goodreads actually encourages you to set up a separate account for each pseudonym, since they don't have a way to link various pseudonyms to one author profile.  To do this, you need to sign up as a new user with a different email address, then "claim" your profile by clicking on the author name on one of your books.  Do this for each pseudonym.

Having a bunch of accounts (or two, in my case) makes it more difficult to keep up, so I set up my pseudonym to link to my real name.  I wrote in my author profile for "Barb Lee" that I could be found under "Barbara Cool Lee" (my main name), and wrote a blog post referring people there, and put that information in the pseudonym book's description as well.  That way I don't have to spend much time logged in on the pseudonym account.

*If your books aren't listed (common with small press or self-published books, you can manually add your book at http://www.goodreads.com/book/new.  But be sure it's not listed already before you do this!  Adding a duplicate could mess up things, so do a thorough check before adding.

*Dashboard.  Once you have claimed an author profile, and Goodreads has validated it, you can do a lot of things to promote your work.  Start at your dashboard:  http://www.goodreads.com/author/dashboard. Your profile is listed, showing the number of books you've written, the number of people who've added your books to their lists, the number of ratings, reviews, etc. Then each book is broken down individually, with the same information.

You also have a blog.  This is easy to create (just write a post), and you can make announcements about promotions, releases, and/or just copy the same info you post on your regular blog.

*Next comes the Advertising section.  I have used Goodreads' self-serve advertising, but honestly I'm not seeing much response to it.  It's easy to do:  just follow the directions and it'll pull the cover photo and link from the isbn you enter.  You have a very small space to enter advertising copy, so think about what you want to say and play with it a bit.  They recommend a "call to action," for example, "click here to add the book," instead of simply telling about the book.  You can also target specific genres and authors, which they recommend (this means the ad will appear when people who expressed interest in those genres and authors are surfing Goodreads).

As I said, I didn't get much response to my ad for The Honeymoon Cottage:

but I did get some results from my Cat's Blood giveaway ad:


*Which brings me to Giveaways, one of the best promotion tools I've found.  On Goodreads, you can give away a copy of your book (must be a printed copy, not an ebook, and must be published with the last 6 months or be an advance copy).  How is that a good promotion?  Well, you simply list a giveaway (they walk you through the steps from your author dashboard), and they do all the work.  They list it, gather the entries, and pick the winner.  When they inform you of the winner, you mail it to the person (do NOT add the winner to your mailing list, by the way; it's against the rules to ever send them anything but the book they win), and that's it.  

I did my first giveaway last week.  From June 5-10 readers could enter to win a copy of The Honeymoon Cottage.  Results?  507 entries, 1 winner, and... over 90 people added the book to their to-be-read list.  That's the big payoff.  All of a sudden, 90 people became aware of my book, thought it sounded interesting, and put it on their list of possible future reads.  The intriguing thing is that when they did, their 2000+ friends saw  a message that said "Jane added The Honeymoon Cottage to her to-read list."  So those are the numbers from a mere 5-day promotion:  507 entries, 90 adds, 2000+ potential readers who at least had a chance to glance at the book.

Last week I had my highest sales of the previous 6 weeks.  I don't think it was a coincidence.  Good return for a promotion that only cost me one paperback and postage.

My only mistake I think was doing such a short giveaway.  I noticed the books with the most contest entries were not just from famous authors; they also were giveaways that ran for at least a month or two.  So I've listed a second copy of The Honeymoon Cottage, and a copy of Cat's Blood, and am running the giveaways for a long time.

*The last three items on the author dashboard are E-books (you can actually sell your ebooks directly through Goodreads, unless you are doing the KDP Select program which restricts sales outlets), Q&A groups, and Facebook Fan Page tab.  I haven't done any of these yet.  I'll write another blog when I get to them.

So that's what I've learned so far on Goodreads.  I'm finding it one of the best places to directly interact with readers, but I've barely put my toe in the water so far.  There's a lot to learn.  If you're on Goodreads, stop by and enter my giveaways, and be sure to "friend" me if you haven't yet so we can follow each others' journeys!

Happy writing, everyone!

Barb

Tuesday, June 12, 2012

Thank You, Mr. Bradbury, and Good Night

Quite a bit has been written in the last week regarding the passing of Ray Bradbury. I didn't know Mr. Bradbury personally, but I loved his writing. When I first heard the word "voice" applied to writing, he was one of the writers who immediately came to my mind.

I've read that he didn't think of himself as a science fiction writer; that he's stated he only wrote one science fiction book (Fahrenheit 451), and that he regarded his books such as The Martian Chronicles as fantasy. I didn't make that distinction when I was a kid raiding my brother's bookshelves or devouring the scant rack of SF/F in the library — it was all the same to me. Wondrous tales about far-off places, be they about outer space or Mars or Green Town, were all I was looking for in those days. And Mr. Bradbury's stories fit the bill in spades.

I know the "Big Three" of science fiction are generally considered to be Isaac Asimov, Arthur C. Clarke, and Robert A. Heinlein. Well, I had my own "Big Four" of speculative fiction: Asimov, Clarke, Heinlein, and Bradbury. Asimov wrote fascinating novels that were as dry as dust. Clarke wrote inspired stories that seemed to be only a few steps away from today's reality. Heinlein wrote amazing tales that dealt (sometimes sneakily, sometimes not) with social themes. Bradbury...Bradbury wrote evocatively of the fantastic in a way which made it at once familiar and utterly alien. And it was Bradbury who taught me to appreciate the short story.

Even the titles of his stories — and his collections of stories — are amazing. Some titles are taken from poems, some, I assume, are his own. Who could resist wanting to read The Illustrated Man, The Golden Apples of the Sun, The Machineries of Joy, or A Medicine for Melancholy?

One short story of his in particular has stayed with me all the years since I first read it as a child: Dark They Were, and Golden Eyed. This story could so easily have been turned into horror and left me shivering. Instead, I read it and was filled with a sense of wonder. Which isn't to say that he couldn't write horror. Something Wicked This Way Comes scared the bejeebus out of me in a way that only two other books — Dracula and The Shining — have ever done.

I was sad when I heard Ray Bradbury had died. However, it would've have been sadder still if the world had never heard his stories. So, thank you, Mr. Bradbury, wherever you are.

A bit of trivia for you: Did you know that Elton John's song Rocket Man was based on Ray Bradbury's short story, The Rocket Man? You can find the story in at least a couple of Bradbury's short story collections, including The Illustrated Man and the 1997 edition of The Golden Apples of the Sun.

Monday, June 11, 2012

Weekly Progress Check-In

Welcome!  This is the Mid-Willamette Valley RWA chapter's weekly progress check-in.

Did you meet your writing goals last week?  What do you plan to accomplish this week?

(The best prize is achieving your writing goals, but as an extra incentive, we will award gift cards from Powell's bookstore to the chapter member and the non-member who check in for the most weeks in 2012.)

Friday, June 08, 2012

Continuing the search

Current Project: Untitled but considering the title: Catching Mera
Status: On Chapter 3


I love research so it is not a surprise I typically write historical romance. I have a very hard time with people who don't like to learn. As a teacher of high school students I particularly disliked the question "When will I ever use this?" Many times I replied, this mostly concerning math, "You can use something you haven't learned." 


I love to learn new things and delve into the unknown. With my newest work, an erotic fantasy romance, I have injected a shape shifter. He shifts into a jaguar. I learned that even the black cats have what is called are called rosettes. It just harder to see on the black cats. I also placed him in the Sierra Madre Mountains. One parent being an Apache the other white. 


My Lakota/Pinkerton series was based on the Lakota Sioux. I learned some basic language and a lot about their history. So now I'm taking on the Apache. It's fun but time consuming yet I'm loving every moment.


Oh, and I learned something very important about the jaguar. This big cat likes water. And most of my books have swimming scenes in them. I was thrilled to discover this.


Where is your research taking you?



Thursday, June 07, 2012

WRITE WHAT YOU (DON'T) KNOW

Current Project: My LEGACY series
Status: Edits to book #6
Posted by: Genene Valleau, writing as Genie Gabriel


I am one of those writers forever delving into things I know little about. 

I may start out with good intentions: I know dogs. I know small towns. I know dysfunctional families. I know government bureaucracies and plants and--well, there are many other topics and careers I could stick with that I know. 

But I'm innately curious. I want to know about lots of "stuff." And sometimes a character comes up with a hobby or a childhood interest or a career that's just too perfect not to use. 

What's a writer to do but learn all she can about that topic or experience or career? 

In-person research is great--like visiting a certain city. Or getting a taste of a cop's life by attending the Citizen's Police Academy and going through some of the same training scenarios used for police officers.

However, what if you can't or don't want to experience something? The heroine of book six of my LEGACY series is burned in a fire. I don't want to personally experience that. 

I had already interviewed someone who was a burn survivor many months ago. However, when I started edits to book #6 this week, as usual I wanted more in-depth emotions and details. So I turned to what has become one of my favorite research avenues--the Internet. 

Snicker if you want to, but I found stories from burn survivors that gave personal details I want to add depth to my stories. I don't want gory stuff, but I do want readers to live in my character's skin while she drifts in and out of consciousness from painkillers; while scabs form and new skin emerges from the itchiness of healing. 

So tonight I've been reading personal accounts from burn survivors, and I'm about to start watching videos of firefighters battling blazes. All from the grateful safety of my computer chair. 

Do you write what you don't know? If so, what are some of your favorite ways to get into your character's skin/mind/emotions when you haven't had their particular experiences?

Monday, June 04, 2012

Weekly Progress Check-In

Welcome!  This is the Mid-Willamette Valley RWA chapter's weekly progress check-in.

Did you meet your writing goals last week?  What do you plan to accomplish this week?

(The best prize is achieving your writing goals, but as an extra incentive, we will award gift cards from Powell's bookstore to the chapter member and the non-member who check in for the most weeks in 2012.)

Wednesday, May 30, 2012

Adventures in Self-Publishing: How Long is a Book?


One of the interesting things about self-publishing is the redefinition of what a "book" is.  Many people are self-publishing short stories, either alone or in collections; people are selling novellas (20,000-40,000 words); they're selling huge 200K-plus works.  Length doesn't really matter in an electronic format.  The pricing is whatever the buyers think is fair. The length is whatever the story needs, no more and no less.  No longer do we need to cut work to fit the page count, or pad with extra scenes because the book is "too short" to be marketable.  It's up to the writer--and the reader--to decide if the story works.

One of the things I am doing now is deciding how to market my "Deeds of the Ariane" stories. These are a series of fantasy stories about a band of magical women swordfighters whose mission is to protect the royal family of the Silver Isle.  I had been trying to write them as a trilogy of novels (about 250,000 words total), but now I'm thinking I might try selling each section as a novella, and releasing them on a monthly or bi-monthly basis (thanks, Genene, for that idea!).

Do you have any pet peeves about story length?  Do you prefer a quick read, or one you can get wrapped up in for a long time?  As an author, how would you feel about doing something like Charles Dickens did, releasing a chapter a week of a book, without fail?  Would you find the idea of writing a serialized novel fun, or scary? (I'd find it both!)

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A quick note:  There's a brand-new magazine about indie romance novels, called InD'tale.  They reviewed my book, "The Honeymoon Cottage," for their first issue.  (Yay!)  You can get a free subscription for a limited time at their website.

Happy writing!

Barb
Barbara Cool Lee

Tuesday, May 29, 2012

What I Love About Writing

Pardon me while I wax philosophical for a moment.

Do you write? Congratulations, you're a writer!

That's one of the many things I love about writing, you see. There is no test, no professional qualification. Intent has nothing to do with it. The act of writing is what makes you a writer, and no one can say you nay.

As writers, our journeys will all be different. We each bring our unique experiences, opinions, and outlooks to our stories. And we're all of us at different places along our writing paths. No matter where you happen to be on your writing journey, I bet you're in a different place today than you were yesterday or last month or last year, and you'll be in a completely different place tomorrow and next month and next year than you are today.

Just remember, there's no official timetable, no deadline by which you must reach specific milestones. Your writing journey is yours alone, and it will be a different journey from mine and from every other writer's. Isn't that exciting? You and I may start with the bones of a similar plot, but I assure you my story will in no way resemble yours. Only you can tell your story, and if you don't, the world will be the poorer.

Writing makes me look at the world in a different way. I'm constantly questioning, asking what if? I notice details I may have skipped over in the past. I see the world through fresh eyes, and that can only be a good thing.

I'd like to leave you with the following thought. In the long run, it doesn't matter whether you're already published, whether you're writing with publication as your end goal, or whether you have no intention of ever being published. At the end of the day, the only thing which matters--the thing which makes you a writer--is that you write. The rest are just details.

Monday, May 28, 2012

Weekly Progress Check-In

Welcome!  This is the Mid-Willamette Valley RWA chapter's weekly progress check-in.

Did you meet your writing goals last week?  What do you plan to accomplish this week?

(The best prize is achieving your writing goals, but as an extra incentive, we will award gift cards from Powell's bookstore to the chapter member and the non-member who check in for the most weeks in 2012.)

Friday, May 25, 2012

Safari Moon

Current Project: untitled
Status: one chapter
Safari Moon

Top attributes of a romance novel that I feel are important and how I used them in Safari Moon.

Romance novels are character driven. To me the characterization of the novel is the single most important element. The next most important is the conflict. There must be internal as well as external conflict.

I spend a great deal of time developing my characters. The characters must have a life before the story. They have birthdays and anniversaries; favorite hobbies and nicknames. Several years ago I attended an inservice/workshop at the school where I worked. It taught how different mind styles affected a character's personality.

When the characters in Safari Moon were created, my intention was to set their mind styles in conflict. A minor thing but a very real beginning to their journey to find love. Nyssa is concrete sequential which means she is organized and has to know the what, when, where, how, and why of every task. To her all she does and plans is clear and precise. Solo, on the other hand, is concrete random. Solo will come up with answers before he even hears the question. He will jump back and forth between fact and theory. This ability often leaves Solo unable to explain his thinking.

These are some of the internal conflicts, which leave the characters breathless but dying to figure out the other person's point of view.

External conflicts are usually more obvious and revolve around the physical actions of the characters. They are on the surface not hidden in the mind. These conflicts can change from scene to scene but the major or elemental conflict is a common theme carried throughout the novel.

Romantic conflict is a third conflict one can find in a romance novel. They struggle to come to terms with their emotions. And raw emotions can get in the way of love scenes. When, where, why, and how they occur. Of course all three conflicts tend to merge and separate as the novel is created.

Turning points are also essential to a good romance. Every scene must have some kind of turning point. The first kiss, the moment the protagonists meet, any decision they make which will effect the outcome of the story. In the first chapter, when Solo decides to call Nyssa and ask for her help concerning his 'willing, eager and able women is an example. Their needs to be at least three major turning points as well as a black moment when it appears all will be lost.

Theme, motivation, tone and tension are other elements which I incorporate in the novel. I try to put each of these into each scene. And to keep the reader turning the pages when I write a scene, I plot to a twist. So the last sentence in the scene compels the reader to continue.

Oh, and did I forget point of view. Point of view is incredibly important to creating tension in a story. Each scene should be in only one of the protagonist's point of view.






Thursday, May 24, 2012

CELEBRATING THE END…

Current Project: LEGACY SERIES
Status: Book #5 to beta reader & cover finished!
Posted by: Genene Valleau, writing as Genie Gabriel




I got to "The End" of edits of the fifth book of my LEGACY series on Sunday and sent it to a beta reader. 

As Chris mentioned in her post last Friday about how many times a writer should edit, there's no "rule" for me either. I edit until it feels right--or deadlines force me to let go of the manuscript. :)

I'll probably make a few tweaks when the manuscript comes back from the beta reader. Then it will go to my publisher, who will have more tweaks, then the copy and line edits.   

So The End isn't really The End. LOL!  

Besides, I have several more books of my LEGACY series to edit and write before the big THE END. :)

It felt good to reach that milestone in producing LEGACY book #5. And I realized it's important for me to pause before going back to the "to do" list and celebrate these kind of milestones. That may be something as simple as basking in the feeling of accomplishment and taking a few days to catch up on other things before diving into edits of the next book. But celebrating is good. (In celebration, I also finished the cover for this book. :)

How do you celebrate your accomplishments--whether small or something major?

Monday, May 21, 2012

Weekly Progress Check-In

Welcome!  This is the Mid-Willamette Valley RWA chapter's weekly progress check-in.

Did you meet your writing goals last week?  What do you plan to accomplish this week?

(The best prize is achieving your writing goals, but as an extra incentive, we will award gift cards from Powell's bookstore to the chapter member and the non-member who check in for the most weeks in 2012.)

Wednesday, May 16, 2012

Adventures in Self-Publishing: POD

Hi, all.  Was gonna write a long, involved explanation of POD (print on demand), and how I came to choose CreateSpace to print the paperback versions of my ebooks, but, alas, this guy has not visited me:

So I am way behind on my writing.

The lesson:  trying to be your own author, editor, designer and publisher is like, totally, time-consuming.

Short summary of the CreateSpace thing:  it's easy (just pick a book size, download their book template and format your text to match, save as pdf, upload, proof), it's fairly quick (they take a couple of days to review your submitted text before approving it), and it's cheap (I'll be able to sell paperback versions of my Pajaro Bay novels for $7.99, the same price as a typical New York-published mass-market paperback).  What's not to like?

Eventually I'd like to offer a hardcover large-print edition of the books as well. For that I'll try Lulu. They offer hardcovers, which CreateSpace does not, and my understanding is that they are a better choice for worldwide distribution, while CS seems more U.S.-based.

There's also LightningSource, a subsidiary of Ingram (the giant book distributor). They are definitely not user friendly, but do appear to have the best distribution options available.

So that's all on the POD subject for today.  Happy writing, everyone!

Barb
Barbara Cool Lee
http://www.BarbaraCoolLee.com

Tuesday, May 15, 2012

What's It All About?

In my last post I promised to tell you about THE LAZARUS GAMBIT—the story, that is. I don't know about you, but one of the hardest things I've ever had to do was to create a short description of what the book is about. I mean, how hard could it be? I wrote the darn thing! You'd think that would make it easy, right? Ha!

I think part of my problem stems from being too close to it. I simply find it difficult to boil the story down to its essence. Well, that, and I'm, you know...wordy. I have a tendency to want to throw in everything, including the kitchen sink.

Here's a version of the brief description I provided for my blog post at The Ruby-Slippered Sisterhood:

THE LAZARUS GAMBIT is a Steampunk Romance set in New Amsterdam, an alternate version of Manhattan, and features ley lines and aether, a secret society of aether users, a clockwork dragon, a mysterious death, a heroine who’s aetheric abilities are on the fritz, and a pragmatic cop who doesn’t believe in magic.


That description lists the main elements, but doesn't really give you a feel for what the story's about. Here's a longer, back-of-the-book type of blurb:

Tess Faraday wants her life back as a Fixer for the Aetherium, a secret society dedicated to protecting the world from the misuse of aetheric magic. Most of all, she wants revenge on Garrett Norwood, the man who seduced and betrayed her by stealing the Lazarus Precept, one of the Aetherium's most closely guarded secrets. When Tess discovers a mummified corpse at the center of an aetheric disturbance, she's convinced Norwood is involved. And if that weren't enough, she finds something else she can't explain--a cop who's unaware that he's surrounded by an unusual aetheric aura...

Chief Inspector Jack Kilgaard is a pragmatic, down-to-earth copper who's dedicated his life to making New Amsterdam a safe place to raise his younger sister. He wants nothing to do with aether and thinks anyone who believes in aetheric magic is delusional. Though he can't deny his growing attraction for a certain crazy aether-chaser...

Norwood's playing a dangerous game with New Amsterdam's aether, and the corpse is only the beginning. Tess is on her own in a strange city without Aetherium backing, her aetheric powers are on the fritz, and if she's to stop Norwood from destroying them all, she'll need the help of a man who refuses to believe in his own aetheric abilities...


So, what do you think? Is there enough description? Too much? Does it intrigue you? Exhausted minds want to know!

Monday, May 14, 2012

Weekly Progress Check-In

Welcome!  This is the Mid-Willamette Valley RWA chapter's weekly progress check-in.

Did you meet your writing goals last week?  What do you plan to accomplish this week?

(The best prize is achieving your writing goals, but as an extra incentive, we will award gift cards from Powell's bookstore to the chapter member and the non-member who check in for the most weeks in 2012.)

Friday, May 11, 2012

How Many Times Do I Need to Edit?

Current Project: Rebel Heart
Status: Editing one more time



I think I have become paranoid. Rebel Heart is one of my favorite books. (that I have written) And now that it is about to be rereleased, I can't stop going over it, changing it, making over the heroine and the hero. I was such a different person when I first wrote the book. Historical romance had a little bit different tone. I'm hoping I have updated this book to 2012. 

For those of you who were at the last MWV meeting you will understand completely when I thank Genene once again for my new cover. 

Thank you Genene!

So I've told myself this is the last edit, the last run through. I have approximately 100 pages left. I have actually made very few changes, thank goodness. 

Happy writing and editing to all.

Oh and happy promoting because that is the next stage of the game for Rebel Heart and me.


Thursday, May 10, 2012

TO TOUR OR NOT TO TOUR...

Current Project: Book #5 of LEGACY series
Status: Going to beta reader this week
Posted by: Genene Valleau, writing as Genie Gabriel



On Monday, I started another blog tour to promote my latest release, LEGACY OF ANGELS. 

Some authors have gone wild and crazy and hit a different blog every day for twenty or thirty days. The very idea of doing that had my eyes rolling back in my head. At 750 to 1000 words per blog, that's enough words to write a novella!

So I found a more sane (for me) schedule--a different blog once a week for four weeks. That I can handle! I did this kind of tour with my March 1 release and thought it worked well. I got a mix of comments from my loops and new-to-me readers. I've also heard not everyone who reads a blog leaves a comment, so there could be masses out there lining up to buy my books. :)

Which leads to the question: how does this translate into sales? Not sure. It would be wonderful to have hourly rankings as on the Amazon web site. However, I'd probably be spending time checking stats instead of writing. 

So for now, I see blog tours as an investment to build readership over the release schedule of my series. I'm getting my name out to potential readers and will consider sales as I get statistics for them.

As a reader and/or writer, how do you feel about blog tours? Is this something you do or will consider for promotion? And have you ever bought a book from reading about an author who is touring?

Monday, May 07, 2012

Weekly Progress Check-In

Welcome!  This is the Mid-Willamette Valley RWA chapter's weekly progress check-in.

Did you meet your writing goals last week?  What do you plan to accomplish this week?

(The best prize is achieving your writing goals, but as an extra incentive, we will award gift cards from Powell's bookstore to the chapter member and the non-member who check in for the most weeks in 2012.)